Suddenly it hurts the most
the memories that i hold so close
i stand with tears inside my eyes
reminded of our sad goodbyes
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p1 I loved the depths sensitivity honesty of this poem, I wanted to express my appreciation; reading well written poetry is a precious experience;
Your poem 'Gone' is a beautifully written heart tearing poem, encompassing the bitter agony of a heart tearing farewell. Power to your ink : )
p2 in winter here in a few months, when I have a warm fire going, a shall read all your poems one night; it is nice to have something to look forward to. Enjoy your days there.