Sunday, October 25, 2015

Gone Comments

Rating: 4.6

I will not scream
I will not cry
I feel sick
I think I'll die
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Elisabeth Wingle
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Julie Smith 04 August 2016

Wow sums up what I went through in April. Though I learned the bad thing was in fact kind of good for something. Nicely written, touching and to the point :)

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Elisabeth Wingle 29 July 2016

Thanks you Judith it was a long time ago, but it was definitely written From the heart

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Bri Edwards 19 May 2016

But obviously not forgotten. Nice one. BRI :) Wes sent me a note. I am not sure I have EVER banned anyone (other than wives) . Try again! (WE never got married, DID we? ?

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Elisabeth Wingle 19 May 2016

Ok I'll try it again.. I am pretty sure we never married. There are a handfull of nights in my youth that are a little fuzzy....... You didn't spend any time in Cleveland in the early 80s?

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Wayne Kingston 03 March 2016

Like it...well said...experience revealed. Keep writing'!

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Wes Vogler 07 January 2016

Good time to take up Sudoku I recommend diagonal moyen (middle) absorbing and comforting. Then of course there is vanilla ice cream. You express yourself well. ta

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Ernest Makuakua 06 January 2016

love your writing talent beautiful piece

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Sina Farajzadeh 15 November 2015

Hi. I just read your poem. It's about a loss. My condolences. We humans are not immortals. We live and die... But what remains of us is the memories for the others. And the legacies of the poets is their works. Thanks for sharing. Good Luck

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Hazel Durham 01 November 2015

Beautifully written poem with intense and deep emotions so powerfully brought out with a lovely style!

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Elisabeth Wingle 01 November 2015

Thank you Hazel, I am honored that you took the time to read some of my poems.

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 October 2015

Short and sweet, it flows so smooth. Liked it.

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Elisabeth Wingle 31 October 2015

Thank you

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 October 2015

Anyway I must go on the will and determination to live and to enjoy life ever after sad times is powerfully expressed here in your poem. thank you very much.

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Souren Mondal 25 October 2015

It's always difficult to cope up when someone just packs up and leaves.. Making peace with that sudden exposure to loneliness is always difficult.. A well penned poem Elisabeth..

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Titto Mutunguti 25 October 2015

Wow...nice piece from your heart..hope it gives you peace...Wrote a poem similar to yours..i am gone.you will move on...be strong

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Elisabeth Wingle

Elisabeth Wingle

Cleveland, Ohio
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