Friday, June 20, 2014

Gone Comments

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You told me goodbye and never turned around
As you drove off, I dropped to the ground
Cried and cried wishing you'd come back
How'd your heart turn so black?
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Lyndsay Thomas
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Khairul Ahsan 22 June 2014

Love and tears go hand in hand. 'How much more pain can one go through? ' - - Pain purifies the soul.

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Oscar Robles 21 June 2014

Hello, nice little poem of pain. I feel you and I'm sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing. Read some of mine if you'd like. Take care.

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Sekharan Pookkat 20 June 2014

I miss you more and more each day- I like it

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Lyndsay Thomas

Lyndsay Thomas

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