Monday, January 2, 2012

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This morning as you walked out the door
You told me not to worry anymore
You said you'd be back, and I believed you.
But as the hours passed on
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Jasmine Ramos
car
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 03 January 2012

wow, you hit us with your first poem i see every move, i feel your every pain nice

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Dave Walker 02 January 2012

Really great poem, liked it. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Human Race.

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Jasmine Ramos

Jasmine Ramos

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