Wednesday, April 10, 2013

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Rating: 4.0

I drown in my invisible tears
Invisible like me
I say nothing when you pass
because I know you don't feel anything.
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Jay Lukaksi
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David Wood 11 April 2013

A very strong poem about love. I hope you get over him if he doesn't come back to you. Nice poem though. Keep writing.

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Ja Lukaksi 11 April 2013

Yes, exactly. I'm just a tad young to express my emotions as well as you just did. Tsk, I can never think of the words quick enough, and then someone else finds them. Oh well. I'll improve!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 10 April 2013

A feeling bathed in broken hope with the hope inter woven...

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