Saturday, February 12, 2011

Gone Comments

Rating: 4.5

When the last word has been spoken
And the door has firmly shut
There is nothing left to say
You cannot tell the sun
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Annabel Cruz
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Lynn Glover 16 February 2011

This poem is so set apart and it tends to make it final that you are gone. Don't look anymore, I'm gone. Great write. Lynn

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Karen Touzalin 12 February 2011

Thanks for sharing, this poem is so personal to me

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Annabel Cruz

Annabel Cruz

Havana, Cuba
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