Friday, October 6, 2006

Gone Comments

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Eyes glazed forward, and her heart beat is now still
Body lays, so frozen as life has so evaporated to nil
The prickles of such a realisation, dawns upon all
That this completion has diminished, and set her soul
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Lesa K 06 October 2006

This is beautiful- you have found the words to express the sorrow ever so well. And sadly you are right, grief is a 'timeless thief.'

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