Wednesday, December 2, 2009

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Everthing I once knew, every touch,
every smell, every breath... Is gone...
My heart feels like its stopped beating,
like I can't take another breath...
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Elizabeth Dawn
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Nikunj Sharma 02 December 2009

this is a nice poem, well chosen words, phrases like speaking to wind...salt in the ocean waves....tears falling no more....it all creates a good picture of pain and lonliness. good work

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Elizabeth Dawn

Elizabeth Dawn

Palmdale CA
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