Tuesday, April 17, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

tears slowly run down these eyes
been hurt for the last time by your lies
not ready to let go of you
but far apart we grow
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Fallen Angel
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Ramesh Rai 06 May 2012

Sad but beautiful. no matter, the life is so, does not stop. keep it on.

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Wow! This is one of those sad and painful poems, written with not a pen but a tear drop, it really is very profound and draws so many emotions to the reader, I really thank you for sharing this poem, worthy to be digested, great! The_African_Son

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Romeo Della Valle 29 April 2012

Sad but beautifully crafted! Outburst of the heart that can be deeply felt through this amazing write! We all go through this painful situation as we learn our lessons in life and move on toward new horizons! Through writing we can release the pain we suffered and you have done very well my dear! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Valeria! I have been there many times and I survived and such are you! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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