Sunday, May 10, 2009
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like a raging ocean filled with crashing waves
i pray to fade away
and when i close my eye
i can see forever
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Bright Rose
24 May 2009
WOW, that was AMAZING, especially the last 4 lines, sooooooooooo deep and strong, your poem is very meaningful, suggestive and evocative, I LOVED your words, they are 'perfectly' chosen, you are the BEST, well done
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9/10/2025 5:14:47 PM # 1.0.0
wow another great write. i love the way you began an ended. you are very talented but you dont need me to tell you that.