Wednesday, May 27, 2009

Gone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Are we meant to be?
Are we meant to last?
When I look at you...
All I see is our past.
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nathan hawk
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LCPL Hawk 05 May 2011

ik makayla this was when caitlin and i were dating but now shes like a sister to me

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Makayla Straight 26 April 2011

I hate to say it but maybe losing her was for the best. It made you who you are today. A U.S. Marine. And a good friend. Things happen for a reason, good writing.

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wonderful... it hurts to lose someone you really cared for... ik ive had it happen... and just a tip writing poetry doesnt have to be depressing. read those about love or something happy you might get inspired. just a thought.10/10

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nathan hawk

petersburg west virginia
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