Tuesday, December 11, 2007

Gone Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I wish I could figure out a way to say
How much pain you put me through that day
Just a kid who made mistakes
You took my love and threw it away
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Olivia Braun
sorry
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Adeline Foster 06 September 2012

You said it well. Now throw away the hate so it will not be a part of you. Then, write poems about other subjects: trees, the wind, a kitten, anything but love. Read mine - Night Shift - Adeline

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left alone and forgotten 30 April 2009

wow! great poem! ! 10++++ keep it up! !

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Emily Oldham 03 October 2008

great poem, thanks

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Rani Turton 16 April 2008

Disillusion and reality put simply, very touchingly. If someone causes you pain its them who are the losers. Walk straight and tall, Olivia.

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Marvin Brato 11 December 2007

Nice poem, simply meaningful. Thanks, a 10.

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