Friday, August 29, 2008

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i can see your face everytime i close my eyes
the smile i see reminds me of the past
all the joys and laughter i don't regret
the moments we had i just can't forget
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yeonna mollejon
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Silence Dogood 29 August 2008

Well done i think you could improve it but the story is good but i think you could do better

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yeonna mollejon

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