Monday, November 14, 2016

Goldilocks Tale Comments

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Once upon a distant star
way away from where we are
sentient beings from afar
told a tale in their memoir.
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Harley White
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Bill Cantrell 18 February 2019

Also, I think the picture is magically enchanting

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Harley White 18 February 2019

Yes, the picture was a fortunate find for me.

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Bill Cantrell 17 February 2019

You had me in circles until the last line! ! Every turn in life could be a Goldilocks story...interstellar Forrest mash inhabitable by whatever anomaly preventing a good bowl of heavenly porridge...as always, I am forever intrigued by your poetry! !

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Harley White 18 February 2019

Oh my, your fantasies really took off with this poem… how wonderful! And thank you so much for your continuing interest in my poems!

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