Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, July 25, 2012

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It is good for health to miss
To feel some thing short of kiss
But a nice feeling and belonging
It is how one should feel with nice beginning
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

Really beautiful poem Aadeesh Shastry6 minutes ago I loved reading this poem. Comment 0 the wording is good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 September 2012

Alexander Braun1 minute ago the wording is good but the multiple grammar mistakes make it very difficult to understand. if you can iron out the grammatical errors then this will be a really great poem, good job.

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hank you oldy for the poem u made for me.thank u so much... Deletejadia4708au Naidz Ladia i dont know how to say thanks for this poem oldy..but prior to all, i like it very much..i had made a response poem already, but when i look again, it was gone...i donklnow what happen but maybe there is a problem in facebook....i'll make another later...3 hours ago · Unlike · 1 Deletejadia4708au Naidz Ladia thanks oldy

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It is good for health to miss To feel some thing short of kiss But a nice feeling and belonging It is how one should feel with nice beginning

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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