Golden Tree Comments

i liked very much ur story of the golden tree Against a sky of azure blue Touched with purple hues A lithe, dancing golden tree can be found In any place, time or realm, She could be you or me- Perhaps anyone’s wounded soul, Where its world seen through a kaleidoscope Is none but a shattered dream… liked these lines. God bless you and thank u for sharing

She wept for all of the hurt through which she lived. When she read the world through that kaleidoscope, There were none but scattered shards of broken glass great and a good job hey the poet of nature.. really sweet and the plea you presented for a golden tree is symbolic way... menaingful, and heart touching poem is this one..loved it...