Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Golden Sunset Comments

Rating: 5.0

Golden sunset is the Nature’s best,
So the age with clarity blessed;
The dazzling sun blurs the vision,
So the youth can’t self envision.
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C. P. Sharma
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 30 June 2009

A lifelong tale is well illuminated from this poem. The life of a human being is full of crests and troughs of experiments. Sometimes we fall to learn and experience various lessons that in the long run enhance our responsiveness towards the dealing of life making our pillars of maturity more and more stronger as life proceeds. The liveliness ascends even more when we dictate our teachings of dignity to younger generations and watch them growing practical with positive attitude towards life. The post productive era is one of the golden episodes when sitting back at home with buddies we put our analysis of what we had been doing throughout the elapsed part of life with so many regrets and things to be proud of too but the most amazing peculiarity of this last episode is that we keep our treasure boxes full of remembrances that represent our earnings. A very well seasoned poem. Congratulations! !

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Lady Grace 04 June 2009

golden sunset means beautiful day of accomplishment..grace

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Obed Souza 01 June 2009

The sunset announces the dawn of a brand new day... At noon, when it is very hot you can get some sunburns, the same if it is too cold... The sunset reminds us of rest time, and I´m not talking about sleep, I´m talking about rest... We find rest among the ones we love and trust, or when we love. Beaufiful and inspiring Nice doing! Keep in touch. 10

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Obed Souza 01 June 2009

The sunset announces the dawn of a brand new day... At noon, when it is very hot you can get some sunburns, the same if it is too cold... The sunset reminds us of rest time, and I´m not talking about sleep, I´m talking about rest... We find rest among the ones we love and trust, or when we love. Beaufiful and inspiring Nice doing! Keep in touch. 10

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Brishti Mazumdar 01 June 2009

It is already a much greeted poem.I want to add that The Golden Sun although sets in your verse, it rises in your wisdom. - Brishti Mazumdar

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Surya . 01 June 2009

hi sir, wonderfull thoughts and neat execution.a thoughtfull and touching poem. i like the following para. 'After the life’s long tiring quest, I can at last retire and rest; With old friends now I can have jest, Make new friends from east & west.' pl call me ravi posted 10 surya

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 01 June 2009

Sunsets as beautiful as the warmth received during the day, this it's promise for another bright tomorrow. A wonderful write

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Gordon Wilkinson 01 June 2009

So golden and so beautiful everyday we manage to exsist in our dusk

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Carol Gall 01 June 2009

wonderful! well written 10

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Miriam Maia Padua 06 December 2008

golden sunset...very meaningful...beautiful...make us love the sunset of our own life....embrace without fear and hesitations...but with open arms.. .thanks for sharing this.. .this is an inspiration for us in our journey towards tomorrow.. ....leaving our youthful history behind and face the sunset of our lives... 10+++ and my vote

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Charmaine Sinclair 28 November 2008

the intonation simply rolls off ones tongue like liquid silver. It is a poem that fills the mind whilst reading, spreading it to the future and behind, away from the now. A fitting name.

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Bonnie Collins 03 November 2008

What a beautifull write filled with many hues of wisdom, if only we could look back and take with us all the sunsets of yesteday and paste them in a vault of tommorow's glow..... Bonnie

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Wojja Fink 26 October 2008

One beaming face here C.P.... thank you for the second sunset this evening and a song in my heart.

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Sandra Fowler 29 July 2008

Golden indeed. We are all sunset travelers. It is just that some of us reach the western light more quickly than others.Lovely write. Warm regards, Sandra

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Bonnie Collins 14 July 2008

Enjoyed reading this very much it leaves the reader with a feel of tranquility and admiration of life inspite of its ups and downs, and leading them to look forward to the fact that if life should end, one is is at peace with life inwhich it has lead with no regrets but filled with happiness for what is not what life is not.... This is my interperation of Golden Sunset which was penned with much pride and satisfation.... Very good, very direct, and structure wise on the same path line after line..... Excellent choice of wording......Bonnie

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Ramesh T A 08 July 2008

Golden Sunset is perhaps the other name for Golden Handshake, it seems after all trials and tribulations in life!

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Onelia Avelar 07 July 2008

...so peaceful and full of humility and teaching humility by facing the sunset...of own life. Thank you.

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Chitra - 03 July 2008

simply delightful i too felt rejuvenated after reading this refreshing poem

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2008

Courting sweetness in the sun set... an attitude so sweet...a short sweet write...10

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Rema Prasanna 02 July 2008

I liked this one for its elegance... life's exceptional acceptance... Weell scripted GOLDEN SUNSET.. It has poise and wisdom. Thank you for sharing this excellent work..10+ Rema

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