Wednesday, August 28, 2013

Golden Sun Streaming Through Comments

Rating: 3.0

Morning dew
Silver mist
Golden sun streaming through
Spider webs
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Mary Forrester
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Khairul Ahsan 19 May 2014

'Morning dew Silver mist Golden sun streaming through' - Wonderful lines to begin with, and to end the poem with. Superb imagery! 'Blades of grass bending down All along the Boreen' - A charming, picturesque expression. A poem that deserves 10/10.

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John Brown 11 September 2013

Nice poem Mary. I had to look up 'Boreen', but what a lovely word it is.

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Lorraine Colon 30 August 2013

Very nice poem. I pictured each line as I read it.

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