Golden Sand Comments
The desert's golden sands
Entice men with greed.
The thirst for more never ends;
Remains an insatiable need
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Two stanzas contrast each other, and it reminds us what is the most important in life. Living peace and ease! The rhyme was soooo good. Love it
A well authored poem. Truly splendid and inspiring...5 stars*****
It is fitting to compare desert sands to gold, because gold is a sterile kind of wealth. It does not engender life. Lakes and marshes are places where life flourishes. I wish our currency were pegged to the value of lakes, not of gold! 5 stars for a thought-provoking metaphor.
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8/4/2025 2:52:52 AM # 1.0.0
The thirst for more never ends; Remains an insatiable need men all men who are always at a stand greed for the thirst comes first as all men less eunuchs are so differently wired they keep sending signals into free space to others trace and say come over to my place now i can't wait my wires are twitching come and embrace