Golden Melody Comments

This poem probes into the intenral issues humnankind has which impede happiness and contentment. Well written.

Good melody; change creates discord, we seek alignments to create harmony.

in place of rest and harmony spreads discord and indifference, less willingness to trust to chance and a belief salvation lies in money...liked your song very much....... yes there is lot of truth in your words dear Poet... you observe a lot and write on it...... that is the typical characteristic of a Poet. thank you dear Poet. tony