Wandering in wilderness; my friend
What are you looking for?
The golden lotus
With thousand petals?
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Dear Sir, How terrific is the Satan's works in misguiding people from spiritual enlightenment was beautifully written with poetic rhythm and insight I appreciate very much. But, I feel the way to get spirtual enlightenment was not written with equal depth. I mean, the way, procedure or technique to spiritual enlightenment was not written with equal depth.
A very well thought out piece, I enjoyed reading this, 10 Lynda xx
very relaxing combination between the conscious and unconscious state of mind and heart! ! ! very clever and full of inner beauty! ! ! keep writing! ! !
Very deep..and very powerful..the sins of society..and the hope of the unforgotten promise still leads... Superb write..truly amazing..I'm gonna add this to my fav list.. Thanks for sharing...
I like the lyrical quality of your verse. A bit lost about your allusions. nice write.
Really Golden lines, to pointing out the commitment and response to the society, thank you Dear Author,10++
tthrough these lines I can see that golden lotus unfurling its petals of eternal bliss
Fascinating...the last stanza is very soothing and beautiful.10 for your eloquent write. Warm regards, Sandra
Excellent write my friend, beautifully worded. Best wishes, Andrew
teach the golden lotus to not take the path of the satanic flames instead to tread a way of love and devotedness let them stand head high and preach brotherly love and not take to fanaticism A++ and 10+++as always anjali
Yeah thousand petaled lotus exists in every being and is known as Shastrar, When mind delves within and is purified and made calm one day divine powers descends on thousand petaled lotus and open up one after another petal and hidden faculities in mind begin to burst and come to the fore... Mind becomes intutive at first lastly blind fold is removed and the third eye of wisdom(seen in shiva) opens up and man is almost divinzed................ Good poem......
the search ends within....well said, , , wonderful poem-10
Sir, there is so much to learn from this poem........ a great great poem.
Close you eyes and embrace your true self and the golden lotus you will find. Inspiring poem Sathya. 10 Bob
'the search always ends within' very beautiful work sathya! ! ! ! !