Monday, June 2, 2008

Golden Hair Comments

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Summer has arrived, bright and golden like once before; golden above the weightless ticking of days and became moonlight beating upon dark water of the nights.
Her golden hair hung down, touched and cuddled the green blades of grass, and when those grasses passionately grew like wild weeds, they begin to block her sight, mind and were cut away.
Perhaps both of our consciousness mingled unconsciously in the hearts, but when consciousness advanced and conquered, all was sliced apart and split. Her words begin to stir the moments like early autumn leaves rushing a summer sun.
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Aury Cecile 02 June 2008

This poem is so magical. It meant so much to me that it nearly swept me off my feet. You are an amazing writer, and people can relate very well to your poems. Please keep writing, I'll look forward to reading more of your work! Fabulous! If you could, please read some of my poems and let me know how you like them. I would love to hear your opinion. Thanks!

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Duy Bui

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