Thursday, October 25, 2018

Golden Gate (Precious Heavy Metals, Pt.7) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The golden gate won't peel open for me
It detects me today, but the entrance is dead
The Paradise pass-way won't open up for me
It rejects me today, instead.
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Axley Jade Blaze
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M Asim Nehal 25 October 2018

Your poems are unique in nature as it takes readers to the doorsteps of depression and then all of a sudden the light appears at the end of the tunnel, truth of this life is a bitter pills to swallow.10++++++++ Do not leave the gate it will open soon.

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