Sunday, July 31, 2022

Golden Dawn Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gentle touch
Slight brush
Sipping the dewdrops
From the petals
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Nosheen Irfan
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 August 2022

Beautiful poetic expressions that bring out the beauty of nature. Every line in this poem stands out!

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Nabakishore Dash 02 August 2022

fantastic idea in the poem.

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Jayne Louise Davies 31 July 2022

Glorious poem! Those lovely words just melt my heart. Five stars*

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Bharati Nayak 31 July 2022

A drizzle of light Like the flush Of dimpled cheeks Bathing The mountains and the trees The rays timorously Streaking the silence Of the leaves---A dawn of pure light and love in full glory

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

Lahore, Pakistan
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