Monday, November 26, 2012

Golden Brown Comments

Rating: 5.0

Leaves fading golden brown
Touching down upon the mossy ground
Slivers of daylight
Catching the darkened clouds
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Mary Forrester
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Khairul Ahsan 01 September 2013

An absolute beauty of a poem! You have captured a particular moment, a scenery that the readers can clearly see as they read the poem. Flickers of sunlight thread across The silver rippling stream Wow! What an imagery! 10/10

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John Brown 27 November 2012

Nice poem Mary. Short but sweet.

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