Golden Brew Comments

Darla, to my/our August showcase. thanks. bri :)

durst (dûrst) ► • v. Archaic A past tense and a past participle of dare. - - - - - - - - - - - - - Darla, I don’t speak Archaic! ============================================ For the readers’ sake, I would like to see the title or the body of the poem, OR BOTH give a clue as to the topic of the poem i.e. your father’s behavior as an alcoholic. if I hadn’t read the poet’s note, I’d have been clueless. Other readers might think, as I wrongly did at first, that the poem is about YOU, which didn’t make sense to me. and I wasn’t completely sure if yellow brew was beer or pee! REALLY! I think you probably did very well expressing some of the thoughts and words of an alcoholic. bri :) to MyPoemList

I'm not a heavy drinker as well, but Duras said that drinking is an attempt to fill in the blank of the Universe...* *