Golden Bondage Comments

Yes the 'golden cage of bondage' clips one's wings just for the amusemnt of others. Very apt poem.

ahhh little birdie wants to fly away... i voted :)

doesn't feel complete maybe a few more lines... hugs! !

wow i really enjoyed, keep workin on ur good

A great poem. Keep working on more.

JT IS A SENSITIVE AND A LOVELY POEM

What better metaphor for freedom could there be than a bird? Very poignant. And lovely too, I think. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

With interest the adviser has read your verses … _ at you clever 'adviser! ' _ I congratulate … best wishes...

wonderful poem! I love reading it, my mother even enjoys it, it reminds us when we use to go see my grandma

Well put together. A most enjoyable read. Ian