Thursday, December 6, 2012

Golden Black (The Symbol Of Originality) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The golden black of unity, that cascade upon my deep stress.
' Who said black is not golden'
'Who said black is not dignity'
'Who said blacks are not determined'
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Blessing Anastasia Abaka
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Ernest Makuakua 26 January 2016

Beautiful piece im inspired I remember the way she clean my tears And the way she told me 'Black is golden' And i asked her why, she whispered to me Cos you're golden, d black in you is beautiful, pure and bright. AND I said to myself; 'If I'm golden, blacks are determined' 'I love my Nation' 'I love beauty' 'And I love my Golden Black' i love my golden black and he applauds for a beautiful piece.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 12 October 2015

Verily, a heart touching and thoughtful poem. Loved reading it........10

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 08 December 2012

As Sayeed Abubakar said.. the piece is very much touchy... the symbolic comparision is nice... simple but awesome...

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Sayeed Abubakar 07 December 2012

Very simple language but touchy. I honour your patriotic zeal. No black, no white-man is man. The greatness of a man lies in his work.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 07 December 2012

In my area an idol of a Goddess named as KALI is much popular as the goddess of power and strength. The idol is simply a black and naked woman stands in war-mood on the lied-chest of powerful white God named SHIVA. Four handed Goddess holds sword in one hand, blessing on other, recently cut human head in another and showering no-worry by other hand. So we know the color of the skin can't be considered as the final judgment. The spirit is the matter of worshiping.....The poet here has got such good spirit from ancestors. Thanks for sharing.............................................10++

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Hazel Durham 07 December 2012

Amazing write so beautifully written, love the title!

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Asif Andalib 07 December 2012

Beautiful patriotic write. Keep on writing

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Babatunde Aremu 06 December 2012

Black is beauty! Good poem, I like it

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Sallam Yassin 06 December 2012

black is golden is a unique daimond is great color of my nation and i am proud i am pure like my nation

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Sallam Yassin 06 December 2012

black is golden is a unique daimond is great color of my nation and i am proud i am pure like my nation

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Aloke Mukherjee 06 December 2012

It is very good and simple poem. It rings of your sincerity and love to your country. The emotion is aptly conveyed through words.

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Aloke Mukherjee 06 December 2012

It is very good and simple poem. it rings of your sincerity and love to your country. The emotion is aptly conveyed through words. Go on!

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Aloke Mukherjee 06 December 2012

Very good and simple poem. It rings of sincerity and love to your country. The emotion is aptly conveyed through the words.

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Vijay Sai R 06 December 2012

a powerful poem with a clear message...well done

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Suzaku Vaneko 06 December 2012

What a beautifully written poem, I can sense the emotion of this poem, how beautiful

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Blessing Anastasia Abaka

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