Golden Age Is Coming Comments
Golden age is coming, it is confluence age,
Gracious you should be and be like sage.
Good qualities are always good and adorable,
Grateful are these and these are favorable.
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This poem brings hope; hope for a spiritual, golden age, when cruelty shall cease, and elevate humanity to a higher state of consciousness.
picture of Keith Labonte xreally creative. great job 8 Jun 2015 by Keith Labonte | Reply picture of Matthias Pantaleon xTo live a Godly life to gracious enough. Wide imagery, strong diction! 3 Jul 2015 by Matthias Pantaleon | Reply
Beautiful way of rhyming with the first letter G. Golden age, good deeds, and Godly actions are referred to. Gorgeous poem indeed.
We should always hope for the golden days amidst violence and bloodshed all around. Positive and inspiring drop.Thanks for sharing.
A nice poem that makes the reader optimistic for a golden future yet to come.................10
I think your poet's notes may be superior to the poem itself. I would like to see you write more in the style of your notes, forgoing the devices of Same letter initiation and forced rhyme. You have much wisdom at your disposal but it loses some of its power when constrained to echoing. Just my opinion, Kumarmani, and meant as constructive commentary. Peace
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7/27/2025 6:22:26 PM # 1.0.0
We love the coming of Golden age. Gyro is soul, body is frail. Due to mercy of Supreme soul we live happily. This is an excellent poem really.