Friday, April 18, 2008

Golden Comments

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Gold comes in many forms: all of them hymned
Carolled and forced into lyric shapes
By wordshifters, poets, prosaic apes
Of god, straddling the language, thrusting, rimmed
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Abha Sharma 18 April 2008

Attractive metaphor, apt allusions, great imagery of the written word and all powerful literature… The way you have presented in your golden lines is appreciable….

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Hasan Ali 18 April 2008

Yes. What an interesting subject to write on. I like it, especially the recycling of John Keats to fit the concept. Gold indeed, though brown is a far better color.

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