Wednesday, May 19, 2010

Golden Comments

Rating: 5.0

While the weather was still warm
they played in the fountains
and life seemed easy
it was natural to smile
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Paul Judges
COMMENTS
Edward Kofi Louis 29 March 2016

To get thoroughly soaked! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 July 2010

Excellent conceptualization… ‘the adults just sat quite still, and joked recalling their days of childish fun’ ~ indeed down the memory lane… thanks for sharing … Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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A lovely poem, captivates the essence of life's golden moments. Enjoyed the read.; D

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Anita Trivedi 25 May 2010

Really a golden poem. It has so much to say. very wel writen...................

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Kellen Mage 23 May 2010

Ah the last four lines say so much.....a wonderful finale to a great poem.

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Hans Vr 23 May 2010

Golden poem about golden moments of golden children in a golden sun You are completely right This kind of moments creates such a delight thanks for sharing it in such fantistic and melodious way. Hans

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Ric Bastasa 22 May 2010

SO GENTLE SO REAL AND YET SO LEVITATING. KEEP WRITING PAUL I AM READING YOUR POEMS TOO. AND THEY ARE EXEMPLARY.

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Lynn Glover 20 May 2010

A very beautiful poem, a time for reminiscing and enjoying life. A good Write. Lynn

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