While the weather was still warm
they played in the fountains
and life seemed easy
it was natural to smile
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Excellent conceptualization… ‘the adults just sat quite still, and joked recalling their days of childish fun’ ~ indeed down the memory lane… thanks for sharing … Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
A lovely poem, captivates the essence of life's golden moments. Enjoyed the read.; D
Really a golden poem. It has so much to say. very wel writen...................
Ah the last four lines say so much.....a wonderful finale to a great poem.
Golden poem about golden moments of golden children in a golden sun You are completely right This kind of moments creates such a delight thanks for sharing it in such fantistic and melodious way. Hans
SO GENTLE SO REAL AND YET SO LEVITATING. KEEP WRITING PAUL I AM READING YOUR POEMS TOO. AND THEY ARE EXEMPLARY.
A very beautiful poem, a time for reminiscing and enjoying life. A good Write. Lynn
To get thoroughly soaked! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing.