Thursday, April 5, 2018

Gold Standard, A Fat Man's Toast Comments

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Coffers spilling with gold jewels and jade—
With precious pearls and treasure deeply laid,
When loafs of bread maketh far better aid—
If hungry maws happy were to be made.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 November 2019

A brilliant poem with a precious message sir! Appreciated this wisdom loaded work....10l

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 November 2019

Thank you so much, Dr Swain for visiting this old sonnet with such good feedback.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 April 2018

Greed always provokes thought and diverts attention of a person in diverse direction. Spilling gold and getting every pearl of this becomes motive of a greedy person. This poem is amazingly drafted and wisely shared here...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 November 2019

Today seems a day of thousand apologies. Once again sorry for missing out on your feedback. And thanks for such wonderful comments dear poet.

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