Gold Prospect Pan Poetry Lines Comments

yes I meant to use the second lit, I had a specific observed candle effect in mind, but did not want to over emphasize it :) Ever noticed how colours change in candle light? Yes I replied to you :)

to write enticing passion lit candle flickering seducing lit ...............did you mean to use the second lit? if i hear from you, i may look at both poems again and comment more thoroughly. thanks for sharing. :) bri