Monday, September 14, 2015

Gold Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

Aye sound of a ladies bicycle’s bell,
Old Man! Old Man! Old age is hell.
Two big containers hanging both sides,
That’s why we see your sexy rides.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 September 2015

Marvellous depiction. Thrilling expression. A beautiful poem sharing......10

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Khalid Saifullah 14 September 2015

Amazing, musical touching and thoughtful......................10

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M Asim Nehal 14 September 2015

Superb! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Old man has a heart of Gold...........Love it......A life sketch of a man struggling for bread, pious and God fearing.

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