Saturday, October 25, 2008

Gold Eater Comments

Rating: 5.0

Luxuriant eyes on a head made of gold.
Your way of life will always be silver fed...
Simple to say when your so easily read.
You look down upon us with a smile of jewels
...
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Drake Kinkaid
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Estrella Baldemosa 10 November 2008

some valuable life lessons you have here...great penning!

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Chuck Petz 04 November 2008

Good similes.Excellent process.

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Kesav Easwaran 31 October 2008

'a house made of sand'... very meaningful phrase, apt in the context of the poem...good write frank and expressive, Drake 10

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*Trusting You* 25 October 2008

this is really good, one of your best, if not your best! I love it! *Purkey Girl*

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Chocolate Bunny 25 October 2008

You were right quite a difference. Still just as good as the others

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