Luxuriant eyes on a head made of gold.
Your way of life will always be silver fed...
Simple to say when your so easily read.
You look down upon us with a smile of jewels
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'a house made of sand'... very meaningful phrase, apt in the context of the poem...good write frank and expressive, Drake 10
this is really good, one of your best, if not your best! I love it! *Purkey Girl*
You were right quite a difference. Still just as good as the others
some valuable life lessons you have here...great penning!