Your eyes hunger for money,
Hoping some would magically appear.
Your words flow like honey,
Trickling sweetly down my ear.
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i love your chosen word, simple but meaningful the imagery is perfect and of course this is a great poem
A succinct description of a gold digger and wow! What an attractive title this witty poem is crowned with!
elena, somehow [before i read your invitation to read t] i thought i had already read this one. i guess not, since i left no comment. a nicely flowing and rhyming piece. thanks. but it seems that he may also worship and revere money. maybe not the same as his body. i wonder what profession he will settle on. hmmm? there are a lot of lines i enjoyed but i guess i liked these the best: Your words flow like honey, Trickling sweetly down my ear. to MyPoemList it goes. thanks for sharing. :) bri