Friday, May 12, 2006

Going Up The Steps! ! Comments

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one small steady step at time,
heart brake should be a crime,
i climb it in a slow unsteady daze,
triping all the way but its all a faze,
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Michelle Guza
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Brian Dorn 12 May 2006

Michelle, the way each line is layed out, your poem takes the shape of a series of steps. I'm not sure if that is intentional, but it certainly makes sense considering the title! Good poem! Brian

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