Saturday, January 7, 2017

Going To The Beach Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had some time to myself
so I went to the beach
seemed like a good idea at first
after all the sun was shining
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John F. English
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Chinedu Dike 01 February 2017

Piece of elegance insightfully brought forth with conviction. Indeed, times are different and nostalgic feelings of childhood could make one mad, considering that one is unable to enjoy such innocence and carefree life anymore in adulthood. Thanks for sharing John.

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Sister Frances 13 January 2017

I say to pot with those on the beach, build sandcastles with moats and watch them fill up with the next wave. I guess it's easy when you have kids and you can pretend it's their idea :) make it a Double scotch.

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