Friday, November 4, 2016

Going To Capital Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are all going to capital today,
Come on, you do something say.
Away do not go all near you stand,
On highway side you shake hand.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Dogma Daniman 25 October 2020

Visiting to capital gives immense pleasure. You have expressed your journey experience.

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B.m. Biswas 09 November 2016

you remind me the poem...Up Hill..... holy son....capital....high way.... a spontaneous flow of rhymes...beautify the narration....this lyric.... thanks sir....in this morning it refreshes my mind.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 November 2016

Seems to be the feelings of a pilgrim, nicely painted the human sentiments.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 04 November 2016

In capital we will enter by gates eleven. Nice narration of the journey being undertaken. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 November 2016

A journey. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2016

picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.......very nice...I wish you the best and a safe trip....enjoy! ★ 1 Mar 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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