Saturday, March 24, 2007

Going On A Shopping Spree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Old ladies, dressed to kill!
Laughing, smiling, flashing gold crowned store bought teeth!
Greeting each other with cherry 'Good Mornings! '
Brown and black and yellow and tan
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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David Harris 24 March 2007

Dorothy, your observation is as sharp as ever. I felt that I was on that bus with all those wonderful characters. A beautiful poem full of atmosphere that you so lovingly create through your words. Thank you for sharing it my friend. Top marks. David

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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