Saturday, April 9, 2016

Going Nowhere Fast Comments

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Him: I answered you 
Her: I asked more.. But just friends we are then?   
Him: U ask if I wanna Explore more  
: I told u I answered U 
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Anita Khelawan
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Roseann Shawiak 07 June 2016

Very emotionally descriptive poem, your feelings flow throughout it, love unreturned is one of the most difficult things in life to deal with, because you give yourself totally without counting the cost and receive nothing in return but doubts, conflicts and hurt feelings. An honest evaluation of love never being realized. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Kishore Kumar Das 15 April 2016

a lively description of tragic end to the love story expressed nicely by you...

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 April 2016

Very nice conversation. A sad end to a love affair nicely written.

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