Sunday, May 17, 2009

Going In Circles - The Merry Go Round Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Round and round, like a Merry Go Round
Circling a kaleidoscope of emotions
In dizzying speed we go - in this ride of life.
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June FeirCruz
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* Sunprincess * 29 July 2015

.......nicely penned...thanks for sharing ★

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Carl Harris 22 May 2009

This is quite a charming and well written poem, June, and many relationships seem to be like this these days, what sometimes used to be called 'push and shove' love affairs! Just when a couple gets too close, one or the other kind of 'shoves' the other back a bit! Some times such affairs are brief, but quite often they last for a couple of years or so. Your delightful poem expressed this kind of relationship very well and your descrpitive imagery was superb! Carl.

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