Solid as rock, Six feet or more
Punch like a hammer that
Never would fall
Scars like a trellis
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Your poems just have a way with my heart. Vivi imagery that unfolded as i read. Thank you very much for sharing :)
Duncan what can I say, this is one of the finest pieces i have ever read, Bravo
You deserve a garden of roses for this beautiful story of redemption. A quality poem from a quality poet.10 all the way. Warmest regards, Sandra
WOW! this speaks of roses all the way. What a beautiful storyline and a real treat to read this one. Excellent poem, just perfect. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
So touching, read it twice and it got even better - well done Duncan - Cindy
What a beautiful story Duncan, told by the master himself. Just wonderful. Best wishes, Andrew
DUNCAN, im not sure if i like the poem/story, , , , , , , , , , but i got to say, , its got has a punch.