Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Going Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

Solid as rock, Six feet or more
Punch like a hammer that
Never would fall
Scars like a trellis
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duncan wyllie
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David Gerardino 16 March 2012

DUNCAN, im not sure if i like the poem/story, , , , , , , , , , but i got to say, , its got has a punch.

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Duh Huh 13 April 2009

Your poems just have a way with my heart. Vivi imagery that unfolded as i read. Thank you very much for sharing :)

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John W Fenn 12 April 2009

Bravo Duncan, this was piece was very moving, loved it John

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~ Jon London ~ 12 April 2009

Duncan what can I say, this is one of the finest pieces i have ever read, Bravo

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Sandra Fowler 07 April 2009

You deserve a garden of roses for this beautiful story of redemption. A quality poem from a quality poet.10 all the way. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Nimal Dunuhinga 05 April 2009

The best touching journey!

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Ernestine Northover 05 April 2009

WOW! this speaks of roses all the way. What a beautiful storyline and a real treat to read this one. Excellent poem, just perfect. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 04 April 2009

So touching, read it twice and it got even better - well done Duncan - Cindy

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Andrew Blakemore 02 April 2009

What a beautiful story Duncan, told by the master himself. Just wonderful. Best wishes, Andrew

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