Going Gone Comments

A beautifully envisioned poem inked in a superb style. Thanks for sharing.

This is superb writing and deserves so much more than a 5.2 rating. I think it needs to be savored as well as read- - a slowing down and meditating kind of read.

GREAT! This was an amazing read!

Highly appreciable poem and likes.

Very strong poem.....Enjoyed reading!

you show her specialty, the lips, those two small bundles, you show her the two hands that grip her fiercely, one being mine, one being yours. Beautiful work. Thanks for sharing the poem.

Those two small bundles! Nice piece of work.