Wednesday, May 23, 2018

Going Forward To A Better World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lets put it all together
And throw the dice once more,
Life is but a constant dance,
A new adventure, taking a chance,
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Sandra Feldman
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Robert Murray Smith 14 June 2018

An inspirational write Sandra.++10

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Eugene Levich 23 May 2018

Good advice from a smart and lovely lady!

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Bill Cantrell 23 May 2018

I love this very positive poem Sandra, all poetry should be as such!

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Valsa George 23 May 2018

This is a beautiful write sparkling with hope! Yes, there glimmers a light and it invites us to move forward to a fresh beginning, holding each other's hands. What we need is an open heart and a sense of adventure and the determination never to give up even if the path proves strewn with hurdles! Love every line of this! A huge 10

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Richard Wlodarski 23 May 2018

Love it! So motivational and inspirational! A new dawn is upon us. Let's all march to the beat of the lover. Not the executioner!

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Susan Williams 23 May 2018

Very positive poem, quite upbeat about the possibilities in life. I don't think that is a common attitude these days. People wear such despondent faces these days- sometimes I think it is because modern technology brings us news from all over the world- places we don't even know exist- in a matter of moment we know a child has been murdered in Scotland, a school attacked in Texas, a restaurant bombed in Algiers, , and on and on. We need your voice, my dear!

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Robert Murray Smith 23 May 2018

Sandra, a really positive write. This poem has the world begining a new dawn. Let's hope the sun keeps shining.+++10 Robert

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 May 2018

Sandra, such an inspiring and heartwarming poem...10++++

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