Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Going Down Comments

Rating: 3.1

Down, down, down
There is no end,
It is an elevator that won’t rise,
As it gets hotter,
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Wandering Scarlet
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Evaughn Gray 01 August 2007

that's a very good poem....i liked it ~hazel

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Ana x 06 April 2007

Very often i feel this way, but i don't think that i can get into words the same u did Listen to the song called (The unnamed feeling) it's for Metallica it talks also about this feeling that u don't know and that breaks humans down, it will inspire u to write more lovely poems, TC XXXXXXXX

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fanniesson - 04 April 2007

not my style but you gotta love it and i do mike fanniesson

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Madly In Love 29 March 2007

Another one of ur great poems

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Anita Blake 28 March 2007

hey good poem, its very interesting.

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Cassie Randall 27 March 2007

very interesting. enjoyed it

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