Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Friday, September 19, 2014

Going Camping Comments

Rating: 5.0

Camping is the greatest thing
a family can do.
All of that togetherness
MUST be good for you.
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Kim Barney
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Grace Diane Jessen 06 July 2020

Hey! I like this poem, too. Well done!

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Wes Vogler 05 November 2015

My gawd, Kim Is it possible I have found a poet that writes poetry that rhymes? Just got here a few days ago and the search is under way. Free verse turns me off as I consider it rhetoric and not poetry at all. Just my opinion but I am stuck with it. I really enjoyed this verse. Moves nicely and a pleasure to read. You get a 10 mostly because it is such a relief to find what to me is valid poetry... As Benny Hill would say? Whose the Clever Boy?

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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