Going Away Poem by Tia Maria

Going Away

Rating: 5.0


Somehow I knew there would come the day
Like it always does and once again here I stay
Back to my own life, the one I can always rely upon
I can always count on that, when all is said and done

For you must be free to find what you are searching for
And me, still confused, well I would not ask you for more
So why then is it after you told me what I expected to hear
When you said you were going away, why did I shed a tear

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 02 June 2009

A melancholy and heart touching poem Tia. Beautifully and gracefully expressed! I thank you for sharing! ! Best wishes & hugs, *10*! ! Friend Thad

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This is heartfelt writing Tia. It seems reality hits harder when it actually happens, even though it can be expected. Sad words though. 10 to cheer you up Karin Anderson

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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 May 2009

This is the way to express. When he reads this, he must come back.......very poignant, very touching.........

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Fiona Davidson 20 May 2009

I have to agree with Fay here Tia...so sweet and poignant...Fi 10++

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Fay Slimm 20 May 2009

Oh this is so sweetly sad Tia - -and the verse takes the reader through all the steps towards the final lines with such detailed honesty..... a more than 10 + ++ frpm Fay

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