Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Going Comments

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Serena Blackinton
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Khairul Ahsan 06 April 2016

I've read this excellent poem and am fully impressed. Just four lines, but your poem has touched me deeply. As I understand, you wrote this poem holding hands of a person you love dearly. I do not know if the person responded to your call and 'stayed'. 10/10 for this beautiful poem.

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Paul Warren 20 October 2015

A nice tribute for your love of a person whose life is slipping away. thankyou

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Serena Blackinton 24 October 2016

Thank you, Paul.

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