Wednesday, June 23, 2010

~ Goggle Us Still? ~ Comments

Rating: 4.4

~ Goggle Us Still? ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 23,2010
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MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.
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Ramesh Rai 08 July 2013

how it is if gopgle b our language.most of our problem would have been solved

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Manolo Del Toro 16 December 2010

I can tell by your rating that you are a great poetess. However I am just an uneducated, boring, wannabe, and I am sorry but I don't get it.

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Zack Krzeminski 04 September 2010

i give it a 10 because of its vast intrigue as well as its insanely confusing style im at a loss for words really

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Ken E Hall 06 August 2010

This is like my Oxford dictionary is making love in a syllable abstract way sadly zygote gametes cells are germs, oh english has so many potty words , never the less loved it...regards

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Unwritten Soul 28 July 2010

You are so Original....use some words that rarely used...and u are a poem designer for me, and it original and has own style...different one...and after read some of your poem i think u are very intellect person...u brave to voice what someone dont...take care!

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Carol Gall 27 July 2010

to me it sounds like a whole delicious meal lol wow niv

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Deepthi Vincent 26 July 2010

Hi Niv, Really enjoyed reading this one....crisp and novel write...you never fail to come up with innovative themes...Thanks for sharing: -)

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‘Concept’…’Wording’…’Weaving’… ‘Tissuing’ and finally ‘Presentation’…in perfect blend…a sizzler and mouth watering cuisine…but such Romance…okay Poet please give us for just a side-glance…by which we can programme our honeymooning…lololouuuud...terrific and of beat poetry…. 10+++

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Vinod Kumar 25 July 2010

Latest ingredients of symbolic dish, nice to experience, thanks a lot 10+

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Marina Gasbey 24 July 2010

I love the alliteration, and repetition in this poem! :) You have found a hole different way to describe that which cannot be described! Very nice indeed! ... Marina Gasbey...

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I am getting so much impressed by ur poems...Your way of expressing and usage of words is Unique..and i love it

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Ayaz Warith 23 July 2010

Sorry there are many typing errors...hope you understand...hahahaha Salaam

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Ayaz Warith 23 July 2010

Sorry there are many typing errors...hope you understand...hahahaha Salaam

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Ayaz Warith 23 July 2010

Dear Nivedita, sorry to reply you late. Since I was not on this site, I didn't see your message. Now coming to you poem. It is really great to read such kind of piece her, the place where I find the poets with from all and different strata. And by reading this piece of yours I consider you in the cream of the list. I truly liked your effort. Ayaz Warith

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Amrit Rathi 23 July 2010

Fantastic honeymooning! No language only tactile conversation, lost in ideas in unison-great offbeat poetry. It is lovely! Thanks.

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Marieta Maglas 21 July 2010

A nice poem unveiling a strong and determined person.

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Amitabha Bagchi 19 July 2010

Dear Poet thanks for such a beautiful poetry…language is sent for holidaying…lolol and honeymooning in abstract way… ‘Zephyrus tactile conversation’ ~ indeed tactile conversation is by touch…speaks much than words…and the place of touch in different places evokes different vibes…story ….lips speaks romance/sensuousness ….holding hands speak of confidence/mutual trust…etc ‘We’re in unison ideation.’ ~ Terrific concept… AB London 10/10

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Anita Trivedi 18 July 2010

Very beautifully use of words.... And very well written.......

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Juan Olivarez 16 July 2010

your words are interesting. I am sorry that I don't understand the meaning.

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Very well connoted words and at times found well coined also.Honeymoon ambience is described in an apt, vivid, candid and nonconventional way.You have a uniqueness in your poems, apparently it appears to be very simple but comprehension and internalization require a good degree of depth.10/10.

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