~ Goggle Us Still? ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
June 23,2010
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I can tell by your rating that you are a great poetess. However I am just an uneducated, boring, wannabe, and I am sorry but I don't get it.
i give it a 10 because of its vast intrigue as well as its insanely confusing style im at a loss for words really
This is like my Oxford dictionary is making love in a syllable abstract way sadly zygote gametes cells are germs, oh english has so many potty words , never the less loved it...regards
You are so Original....use some words that rarely used...and u are a poem designer for me, and it original and has own style...different one...and after read some of your poem i think u are very intellect person...u brave to voice what someone dont...take care!
Hi Niv, Really enjoyed reading this one....crisp and novel write...you never fail to come up with innovative themes...Thanks for sharing: -)
‘Concept’…’Wording’…’Weaving’… ‘Tissuing’ and finally ‘Presentation’…in perfect blend…a sizzler and mouth watering cuisine…but such Romance…okay Poet please give us for just a side-glance…by which we can programme our honeymooning…lololouuuud...terrific and of beat poetry…. 10+++
Latest ingredients of symbolic dish, nice to experience, thanks a lot 10+
I love the alliteration, and repetition in this poem! :) You have found a hole different way to describe that which cannot be described! Very nice indeed! ... Marina Gasbey...
I am getting so much impressed by ur poems...Your way of expressing and usage of words is Unique..and i love it
Sorry there are many typing errors...hope you understand...hahahaha Salaam
Sorry there are many typing errors...hope you understand...hahahaha Salaam
Dear Nivedita, sorry to reply you late. Since I was not on this site, I didn't see your message. Now coming to you poem. It is really great to read such kind of piece her, the place where I find the poets with from all and different strata. And by reading this piece of yours I consider you in the cream of the list. I truly liked your effort. Ayaz Warith
Fantastic honeymooning! No language only tactile conversation, lost in ideas in unison-great offbeat poetry. It is lovely! Thanks.
Dear Poet thanks for such a beautiful poetry…language is sent for holidaying…lolol and honeymooning in abstract way… ‘Zephyrus tactile conversation’ ~ indeed tactile conversation is by touch…speaks much than words…and the place of touch in different places evokes different vibes…story ….lips speaks romance/sensuousness ….holding hands speak of confidence/mutual trust…etc ‘We’re in unison ideation.’ ~ Terrific concept… AB London 10/10
your words are interesting. I am sorry that I don't understand the meaning.
Very well connoted words and at times found well coined also.Honeymoon ambience is described in an apt, vivid, candid and nonconventional way.You have a uniqueness in your poems, apparently it appears to be very simple but comprehension and internalization require a good degree of depth.10/10.
how it is if gopgle b our language.most of our problem would have been solved